You have introduced your characters really well. I can imagine them. Well done Erin.
Keep going. I am really enjoying your story, Erin.
Such kindness in your story. Well done Erin.
I can picture the scene and want to know what happens next. Well done Jack.
I got scared when you fell into the icy water. Well done Lucas.
I'm gald everyone was safe at the end. Well done Lucas.
I can't wait to find out what happens next, Afshaan.
I'm glad he persevered. Well done, Heidi.
I like the way everyone saved each other. Such teamwork. Well done Amelia.
Unfortunately not the ones with chocolate chips.
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