Some great facts and excellent use of brackets in the 'famous for' paragraph.
Well done, you have organised this into clear paragraphs with interesting facts.
Super presentation - very eye-catching! I love the images you have chosen to include.
An interesting mix of facts and diagrams. Some good research.
You have chosen some great facts to include. Next time, see if you can have a go at hot.
Really clear information and excellent presentation. Good use of sub-headings.
Some interesting facts about his work. Next time remember to include other headings too.
Super research and I love the way you have included a photograph as opposed to a drawing.
Some really interesting facts. How could you have challenged yourself further?
Lovely writing and facts. How could you have made this look more like a fact-file?
Good choice of presentation and facts. I love the 'inaccurate drawing' too.
Good facts and I love the artwork. Don't forget to use capital letters to start sentences.
A well written piece. How could you have made it look more like a fact-file?
Great research and super use of bullet points in the last paragraph.
Great research, I love the image you chose to include - very relevant.
Unfortunately not the ones with chocolate chips.
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