Super layout and I can see you have used lots of features of newspapers in this.
Good up leveling of vocabulary. How could you have made this look more like a newspaper?
Good understanding of the news topic. Remember to make your opening paragraph stand out.
Really good vocabulary. How could you make this look more like a newspaper?
Super use of passive voice sentences.
Great layout. Maybe you could use some relative clauses next time.
I like the way you have included more than one article. Think carefully about layout.
Unfortunately not the ones with chocolate chips.
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